Pacing, pacing, thread-barren carpeted hall,
passing by each moment – that lurid chamber stall.
Each eve at strike of three, there finds me,
reliving the glory of her inviting screams.
Lucky was I, grateful for always thought,
that nary soul should miss her, as destiny wrought –
Her screams locked away forever now,
no one ever knowing why or how.
Save for me, the master of her misery,
her self now lost to history,
and yet I continue on.
But luck is only as luck can be,
ever rarely – does it fairly – find me.
So never again – might I dissect a friend,
gleefully enjoying frightened eyes when –
removing skin and parts within,
writhing great pleasure to the very end.
Unless I can find another soul;
lonely, less connected, un-whole.
Hark, is that my doorbell rung?
Another victim eagerly sung?
“Trick or Treat! Trick or Treat,”
from such an innocent little ghoul!
Why, surely you’ll come in to meet
what’s left of my last visitor…..
. .. .... ....... .......... ............... ......................... © 2014 John Allen Richter .........................
October 13th, 2014 at 7:17 am
Eeek! That’s a scary one? You had me swinging on a pendulum of emotion as I first though one thing then another finally arriving at the ghoulish truth… Or did I John that was very clever. Xxx
October 26th, 2014 at 5:40 am
Super creepy…written so well I have shivers down my spine.
October 26th, 2014 at 6:10 am
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Just putting this back on top
October 26th, 2014 at 7:19 am
OMG that’s even more scary!!
October 26th, 2014 at 7:55 am
Makes me shudder. A properly, scary, ghoulish piece of writing. Perfect for Halloween.
October 26th, 2014 at 8:06 am
oh heck.. that is scary indeed… better make sure you know on who’s door you ring…
October 26th, 2014 at 11:10 am
Really really scary.. The tables turned on treat for tricks.. Makes it even scarier writing in first person.
October 26th, 2014 at 12:05 pm
How ghoulish and scary….perfect for Halloween trick & treating ~ Good one John ~
October 26th, 2014 at 12:48 pm
yikes….and scary….trick or treating is a lot less innocent than it once was and in a world such as ours i am sure a bit unsafe….what a breeding ground for such sickness, eh?
October 26th, 2014 at 12:57 pm
eek! written with the creepiness of Poe…
October 26th, 2014 at 1:05 pm
What a chilling and powerful ending, John! Stuff for a scary movie.
October 26th, 2014 at 1:31 pm
Eerie, John. Reminiscent of Edgar Allan Poe. Makes me shiver!!
October 26th, 2014 at 3:46 pm
Very scarry. I like how you made the ending a little mysterious by having us follow to find out who was at the door. I hope you don’t live near my grandchildren. Ha. Good writing.
October 26th, 2014 at 4:06 pm
This is disgusting and creepy…and fantastic! 🙂 This is perfect Halloween poem. Well done.
October 26th, 2014 at 4:07 pm
Also, thank you for visiting my blog. Much appreciated.
October 26th, 2014 at 7:28 pm
I read along waiting for the humor, the joke, the pun, the fun–and it was absent as the macabre poetic stayed in the madness, where evil drenched the candied apples, sharpened the razor blades within, reminded us all of the dark passenger too many harbor behind closed doors; very freaky, brave, inventive; thanks.
October 26th, 2014 at 9:05 pm
What a groovy piece. Completely creeped out by this one, brother. Well done, and perfect for the Halloween season- makes me glad I’m not knocking on any doors this year.
October 26th, 2014 at 9:23 pm
Reminded me of Poe as well and could be the basis for a particular heinous episode of “Criminal Minds.”
janet
October 27th, 2014 at 12:41 am
Well, look at you popping back up, Mr. Poe. Well done, Sir. 🙂 You won’t remember me, but I remember you.
October 27th, 2014 at 10:50 pm
You have me at a disadvantage. I noticed your name is not on your blog so I don’t know who you are. I don’t recognize your blog though, An Owl and a Candle? Must be a new one. Your poetry is very good, but that could be any number of people from my past… I hope you’ll reveal yourself. I love a good surprise.
October 27th, 2014 at 8:26 am
I love this – yes, it’s scary, & macabre, but you’ve painted it so well. Good job! xVivienne, of OneVoicePoetry
October 28th, 2014 at 1:04 am
The perfect macabre post for Halloween. Bravo!
November 5th, 2014 at 10:01 pm
John Allen Poe-Richter would be very fitting yes and the following 4 fit your scary well of work. Thank for your addition to my poem. Soon We Will See-Guess I may see Sooner Than Later oops.